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25th August 2022, 12:32 AM
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Will I Catch Anything?
C&C welcomed. Bruce
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25th August 2022, 06:53 PM
#2
Re: Will I Catch Anything?
Too much uninteresting road. You could crop away about half of the road with a similar amount from the left side to create a stronger scene.
Otherwise, this looks good to me.
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25th August 2022, 09:05 PM
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Re: Will I Catch Anything?
Is this any better? Bruce
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26th August 2022, 06:52 PM
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Re: Will I Catch Anything?
That is much better, Bruce, although the rod tip is now a bit close to the right edge. I would have been willing to allow a fraction more road to remain in order to give a little more space there.
Cropping, and original framing of a scene, is always variable and compromises usually have to be made.
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27th August 2022, 02:20 AM
#5
Re: Will I Catch Anything?
Two other points about the image as presented here:
1. The background house seems to indicate that the image could be straightened by a small clockwise rotation.
2. The title indicates that the subject is the fisherman and his rods, but the background house is distracting the viewer.
Perhaps after the rotation a more severe crop might work.
Philip
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27th August 2022, 02:32 AM
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Re: Will I Catch Anything?
Philip, I see your point.
Bruce
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27th August 2022, 02:48 AM
#7
Re: Will I Catch Anything?
Is this any better?
Last edited by Digital; 27th August 2022 at 03:22 AM.
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27th August 2022, 06:37 PM
#8
Re: Will I Catch Anything?
Looking better, Bruce. I am not overly concerned about the houses because, although that tends to create two points of interest, it does give a bit of context to the scene. Maybe slightly tone down the house brightness though.
It is a scene with many options so it will be up to you to try a few variations then go with whatever most pleases you.
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27th August 2022, 07:07 PM
#9
Re: Will I Catch Anything?
Originally Posted by
Digital
Is this any better?
It is, Bruce, but I think you should also apply Geoff's suggestion to remove more of the road.
Cheers.
Philip
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