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    Re: Fall leaf

    You are markknittle61 and I claim my reward!!

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    Re: Fall leaf

    Quote Originally Posted by Gomphus View Post
    You are markknittle61 and I claim my reward!!
    LOL you win!

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    Re: Fall leaf

    Hi Mark,

    I can imagine what attracted you to take the shot: likely a colourful leaf floating in a shallow puddle, with the sun casting a shadow of a tree across that.

    Unfortunately this monochrome PP and the square composition aren't working for me.
    I would guess the former is due to the green weed I can see in lower half of frame, which would distract if colour.
    Personally I would crop further, taking 35-40% off the bottom edge of frame, that would remove the weed and allow use of colour. It also remove a lot of the fine detail in tarmac surface, which makes the scene too busy for me.

    I hope those thoughts are helpful,
    Dave

    PS please forgive my UK-English

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    Re: Fall leaf

    Quote Originally Posted by Dave Humphries View Post
    Hi Mark,

    I can imagine what attracted you to take the shot: likely a colourful leaf floating in a shallow puddle, with the sun casting a shadow of a tree across that.

    Unfortunately this monochrome PP and the square composition aren't working for me.
    I would guess the former is due to the green weed I can see in lower half of frame, which would distract if colour.
    Personally I would crop further, taking 35-40% off the bottom edge of frame, that would remove the weed and allow use of colour. It also remove a lot of the fine detail in tarmac surface, which makes the scene too busy for me.

    I hope those thoughts are helpful,
    Dave

    PS please forgive my UK-English

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    Re: Fall leaf

    Thanks Dave I will post a colored version and see if I can get a different crop.

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    Re: Fall leaf

    it was late in the season and there wasn't much color left, Fall leafDSC_3036P1crop by Anthony Knittle, on Flickr

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