Things go better with Coke

[Javier]

[Manfred M]

Another very nicely done portrait, Javier. Classic loop lighting at work and it suits this model very well.

There is a strange halo behind your model and that does look a little strange. If this were my image, I would be a little more aggressive with the crop on the bottom. I suspect that the image would be a little stronger without the leg in the shot.

In terms of personal taste, I find that the hand and straw in front of the model's face is not ideal as it breaks the visual flow around the face. Had I been shooting, I would have asked the model to position those items a little bit lower.

[mugge]

I don't think this is one of your best shots, Javier. There is a straight line from the model's hair going down to her knuckles I find just too pat. I totally agree with Manfred regarding the position of the Coke bottle and the leg.
Cheers Ole