Hi Kay,
Nice work - it's not that hard now is it?
Now for the CiC ...
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- I'd move the models a little further forward to get a little less light on the background
- I'd put a light vignette around the outside to draw the eye into the middle, and de-emphasize the arm in the middle a little
- Personally, I've always had an issue with arms leading the eye out of the frame, as per the lady in the middle (not always easy to do anything about, although I do tend to get them leaning in with arms around each other, although it's not a perfect solution either).
- Excellent job lining up the eyes (I keep a selection of cane mats in the studio for just this purpose).
Still a very nice shot though.
PS: I've been thinking of adding part 6 to the portraiture school series, but not sure how much interest there is - so if anyone's reading this, lets have your thoughts on it!