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1st September 2023, 01:01 AM
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Basil seed / Mango Drink
Playing around with basil seeds again in some bright field lighting work.
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1st September 2023, 08:47 AM
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Re: Basil seed / Mango Drink
I like it - not sure why but yellow is always a cheerful colour. The composition/organisation of shapes also works for me. Happily clinical.
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2nd September 2023, 08:38 AM
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Re: Basil seed / Mango Drink
I like it. A yellow sphere contrasting nicely against the angles.
Cheers Ole
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2nd September 2023, 09:11 AM
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Re: Basil seed / Mango Drink
Nice one Manfred, well managed light as ever.
However, a bit picky perhaps, but for me the yellow sphere lacks depth, it looks flat like a disc (though perhaps that was the intention ?)
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2nd September 2023, 03:13 PM
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Re: Basil seed / Mango Drink
Thanks for the comments Paul, Ole and David.
David - agreed with the flatness of the light on the ball. That is primarily due to the very flat light I used (a softbox with two baffles and a piece of translucent Plexiglas) and aggressive post processing (high contrast adjustment layer which eliminated the minimal subtleties in the light going through the ball).
I made a few changes and took another shot, which is better, but not quite there yet. I am looking to add a gelled snoot behind the ball to see what that does for me, as well as removing the baffles and possibly going with two hard lights.
This is the newer shot.
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4th September 2023, 10:59 AM
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Re: Basil seed / Mango Drink
I like the increased contrast in the liquid and the straw moved to the left. I think that the sphere's outline is improved but I think that the center of the sphere needs to be like in the first image. That is only my opinion though.
Cheers Ole
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4th September 2023, 12:07 PM
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Re: Basil seed / Mango Drink
I prefer the original. It's just a bit more subtle.
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