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    No sun this morning

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    No sun this morning_A749570-Enhanced-NR by jk Sullivan, on Flickr

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    Re: No sun this morning

    I like the pier, the wave and the person but not the sky ...I'm not even sure it's needed, cropping just below the black edge of the large works better for me.

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    Re: No sun this morning

    Like it. The person in the foreground lends scale to the pier.
    Cheers Ole

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    Re: No sun this morning

    I've merged the two threads, as the images appear to be identical.

    I agree with Bill's comment. While the sky is interesting, it competes too much with the pier and the lower parts of the image. A strong crop, removing about 3/4 of the sky would likely give you a stronger compositiion.

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    Re: No sun this morning

    As an alternative; how about cropping just above the large cloud and a similar amount from the right side ?

    There are several dust spots near the top edge about half way along.

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    Re: No sun this morning

    Nice capture. I agree about cropping the sky, although not as severely as Manfred suggested. I would also add contrast to the areas below the sky and dodge a bit, to bring out the diagonal lines. This is just a few steps and isn't a complete edit, but it shows the directions.

    No sun this morning

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    Re: No sun this morning

    Thank you, I like the comments.
    I'll try my hand at dodging. Cropping makes sense too.

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