Carnations

[Round Tuit]

This is my first cut. I would welcome suggestions to improve it.

[Geoff F]

Looks good to me although I wonder if a few of the paler petals are a fraction too bright?

[Chataignier]

I feel it's a pity that the gypsoph - cant spell it - is cut at the bottom. Is there space around the image to crop wider ? A bit more room around the flowers at the top and sides would also improve the shot I think