André, I like the treatment of the shell, and can understand why you placed it on sand, but while that adds to the story telling I find it detracts from the impact of the image.
While trying to edit this photo, I couldn't achieve satisfactory results in terms of color, perhaps because the color temperature—which I adjusted but didn't get satisfactory results—wasn't right.
However, it's true that this is nothing more than a lame excuse...
In LightRoom, I looked for a preset that I liked, tweaked it to my taste, and then adjusted the usual parameters.
There might be some spots or areas in the photo where the light appears too harsh (specular lights), possibly due to strong lighting conditions. However, I don’t have much experience dealing with that...
Perhaps a small reflector (a simple paper) behind the shell could bring out some detail in it's back, which might add an interesting touch.
Thank you Antonio.
I like the tighter crop.
The mixed lighting probably caused your difficulty with the colours. I used a dim and slightly warm softbox on the left of the scene. I also used a cooler light inside the shell to make it glow of its own. Perhaps the softbox needed to be both dimmer still and cooler even though the shell warmed up to cool inside light considerably. The colour of the sand in the picture is actually quite close to the colour of the sand that I used; which is not to say that it couldn't be changed.
Last edited by Round Tuit; 29th January 2025 at 12:34 PM.
I was completely unaware of the light inside the maritime structure until now, but it's quite obvious.
I wonder if it might be the cause of the specular highlights. It could be tricky to work with two differently coloured light sources.
I'd suggest experimenting with a single light source, perhaps dimming the exterior light to give you more control when processing the image. I'm not sure if it will work, but it's worth a try. Sometimes we have to rely on experimentation when we're unsure of the technical details.
As for the sand, I think it works well as a base for the image, but pay close attention to the framing to make sure it's completely included.
One more thought: a white background ( simple white paper) may help to isolate the object and make it stand out.
I like that version a lot (with the caveat that this is an immediate response that reflects my taste rather than any critical appraisal)
I also prefer that version.