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Wirefox
No3 suffers from a similar problem to No 2 The out of focus area bottom right is distracting. This is what I was wittering on about with three dimensional composition. With shallow DoF its not just the about positioning of the subject/s in the frame two dimensionally you also need to be aware of how the sharp. blurry and transitional areas will sit within the composition.
Very good work though Katy these images are certainly highlighting your development since joining CiC