New Photographer Requesting C&C

[Njbowman]

this is a picture I took ovr the weekend
what do you think?

[Njbowman]

this is the picture -i hope

[Njbowman]

?

[Vandenberg]

dont see a picture

[Njbowman]

i got the picture on my third try
sorry

[jiro]

that must be a vulture eating a carcass, right Gerald?

[Njbowman]

yes, vulture and deer

[jiro]

As a comment, your subject is good. Maybe, you could add some sharpening effect on the vulture and the deer carcass to separate them from the foreground and background well. I would also probably try to reposition the vulture on the 1/3 side from the left for some more punch. You can do this by cropping the image. your first image is good. Hope you post some more.

[Njbowman]