Thank you Grant for your comment.
I tried to capture the screen with "something in the foreground" from the road we were in. I was using a 24-70 on a full frame camera.
I have adjusted the EV pointing at the sky at the half of the frame and blocking it then I moved to the captured position.
At last, I chimp to see that the sky was not blinking
No time for fancy adjustments like tripod, bracketing or whatever
Adjustments were made in LR and CS
Nice capture Mark and thank you for posting here.
Perhaps you could clone that cane at the bottom left part of the image.
The image is well composed leading the eye to the far end on the right.
I wonder if I would not make it denser to intensify the mystery and wilderness of the area.
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@ Jacques
Your image is too small ...
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Thank you Steve for letting us see here your beautiful and well composed image
The rhythm produced by the fences is interesting as the leaves at the foreground give depth to the scene.
It look to me you have used kind of a medium tele, right ?
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What a good work Steve regarding you doing it with a wide angle
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Very nice place Perhaps you could introduce some density in the colors
Curious to say now that I read your post
Probably you are right and I am wrong
I don't think the Waterton Lakes Boundary is over saturated. I do like it the way it is.
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Very good points David
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It surely is better than before.
I don't use that 2:1 format but another one which is very "near": the 3:5 with also good results under my point of view.
But here is a photo with 2:1 relation. I like it. Thank you Colin
Hey, nice use of depth of field, but personally I would perhaps try and edit it a bit more (colour saturation maybe, as the colour is fairly uniform throughout the picture, and maybe this would help to distinguish the green grass more?...) but then again I'm fairly new to this game so it may not be appropriate at all!!
Anyway here are more of mine, tips for improvement? (both PP & composition-wise)
Mozambique rocks
Woodstock, NY
Mozambique sunset
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It is nice but rather sad isn't it ?
You made a good use of the DOF or the lack of it.
Thank you for posting
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Thank you Benbro for posting here
I like the Mozambique rocks with that long exposure and well saturated colours. How did you do it ? ND filter ?
The second one, shot in the same African country, is a strong option because you are using such a tone/colour. Maybe you could clone the "pole" at the far right ?
Woodstock is also a nice picture but - in my point of view - it needs something in the foreground. It has little depth. Perhaps you could have placed yourself lower and get more branches One can feel that the weather is fine and the Sun is harsh.
About placing something in the foreground I have written somewhere before in this very thread. It is my most common practice.
I think all 3 images need something in the foreground preferentially out of focus.
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