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[kaskais]

http://kaskaisphotos.net23.net/

[shreds]

Hi Fernando,

One of your favourite shooting spots I guess?

Whilst achieving 1/3rds vertically the subject just sits too dead centre for me on this one. Your strong sense of silhouette capture works well here; maybe a little more drama in the sky though?

Keep them coming.

[Colin Southern]

I like the shot - simple & serene, but to top section bothers me. Hope you don't mind, but I've taken the liberty of giving it a simple crop - do you think this looks better?



Cheers,

Colin

[Geoff F]

For me, there is a little bit too much plain sky with Colin's version and too much roof with the original, which detracts from the figure.

With both versions, I would consider altering the aspect ratio and removing part of the roof or sky which, I think, may work equally well with both images and would give a totally new impression to the viewer.

But it is all in the eye of the beholder and everybody sees an image differently. I can't quite work out if the man is reading a book or making himself a roll up.