Thank you Kori for posting this picture of yours.
I made two versions of it with much the same treatment but with different crops
I didn't like the crop you did because of visual confusion of hand and legs at the bottom part.
If you have the original: try to correct the un-sufficient detail on her coat. It is from a nice dark blue which is difficult to get with all the light around if you intend to keep your crop.
I like the background but I am sure you do better.
And I like very much the way they look at infinity with hope in the future and all their lives ahead. I like the position of both of them.
It's a good picture made of diffuse light enhancing the beauty of two young persons.
I almost forgot to say that her face is a bit "burned" in terms of pixels but that is a minor problem you can easily correct because you are shooting raw.
Take care.