This one is also very nice and cute, a few things:
Looking at your pictures as a whole, I feel they have too much overall contrast, I mean specially the black clipping point may be set too high. Not sure if it is your monitor or just your style. I find this one for example too dark in the shadows and also too bright on the highlights. Others may be able to tell us if they see the same since the third possibility is that my monitor may be off.
Specific to this shot, I think the girl is not looking where we expect her to look exactly, you may have a better shot with respect to that. I mean she is looking far and a bit low, not exactly at her face and not exactly at the horizon.
Also, for some reason, when I take a picture, there is a big pole in the background. I think you have the same luck! I think with the blown out sky in the background, it should not be too hard to take care of the white and red pole on top of the girl's head or at a minimum get rid of the red part of it to make it blend with the background better.
And last, it is cropped a bit to tight on the lower side of the image, I would love to see her other hand or at least where it is supposed to be, even behind the sleeve.
TFPH!