Originally Posted by
Alis
Well Ali, as usual I am going to honest with you.
The image is great. Yes it is. Really. I do like it.
It has meaning, the person - in this case our young fellow - is interacting with us. It is a portrait with soul, character, personality. Yes, he was waiting for the shot. Or maybe not but he was there looking at you laying in bed. I would almost guess that he had some fever... His hair is not wet but that is with highter temperatures but his eyes... I am not sure. And is that a pajama ? OK it can be. I am in doubt. Perhaps it is not and he just came from the street and felt like laying in bed feeling a bit cold.
But huuummm... But I think the crop is not the best.
I would rather a longer one more horizontal according to the position of our subject.
The idea of showing the two bars is fantastic. And this is what I have been "fighting" for a long time mainly in landscapes: something in the foreground to give depth to the image.
Imagine the same shot without the bars. Bah ! Completely different. Would I have been speculating about his eventual fever ? Perhaps not.
I also suspect that you will get a third bar if you make a larger crop but it looks like you have some room to the left of the left bar and some little room to the right of the right bar.
This image give a - shall I say - "jump" to another level. It is not only a stereotyped photo well executed bla bla bla but a picture where you stop and ask questions like I did.
And this is another level of Photography. (I look like a philosopher not a polititian, no). A level where you involve the viewer in the action - whichever it is - of the subject, a level where you ask for interpretation of the image.
These are images that make you stop. These are the great pictures.
And if you ever get inside the soul of the person and get that unique moment then my friend you are in nirvana.
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Looking over and over I think he had a little fever.
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Originally Posted by
Alis
TFPH, Colin! Great concept and shot as always
The facial expression, the tilt of the body, and the air in the hair gives it a classic feel!
I think it is a bit too dark on the gun, if that is supposed to be part of the focus
Yes I agree with Ali
Nice shot Colin