Ok, I watched a couple videos to get some ideas on what to edit and how to edit. I attached the 0 exposure original as well as the HDR'd picture. Any improvement from the previous pictures?
I realize there's a woman ghosting in the middle of the path, but I didn't notice until I merged them, so...lol And the grass color may be a little overdone, but I really like the vibrant green.
As an image in it's own right, I think it looks just fine (although perhaps a wee bit over-saturated for my taste, expecially the green), but the bit that disturbs me is when you said "I attached the 0 exposure original as well as the HDR'd picture." - if that is shot from only 1 original exposure, then - by definition - it's not an HDR image; it's simply a normal capture in which the levels have been re-mapped.
True HDR requires at least two exposures, but can't tell if that's what you meant or not.