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[jadedhills]

Hi folks this is my first post and i would like comments and criticism, if you please,


EXIF data
http://www.flickr.com/photos/peterbr...in/photostream

Also please feel free to look over my Flickr portfolio
http://www.flickr.com/photos/peterbrewster/

[jiro]

Nice! If you rotate it 180 degrees to the right you might be surprised that it is a good composition, too! You lost some texture on the bright areas, which means it's almost to the point of being too bright. A little bit noisy on the background but a nice work indeed. Good job, Peter!

[Donald]

Very first reaction = 'That's a beautiful composition'
2nd reaction = 'I think there's maybe just a bit too much light being thrown on to the subject. It's very stark.'

Further contemplation might modify those views, but I thought I'd start with the very first thoughts.

EDIT - Once I posted I saw that Willie has been thinking the same sort of things.

[jadedhills]

Thanks for the comment folks will take on board the comments, and will go back to the RAW image and have another go at it.

Kind regards
Jadedhills

[jiro]

Peter, if you may, I tried to work on your image with some simple adjustments and here is what I came up with.



This is just one of the possibilities that you can do on the post-processing. Your work is really nice and good to work with on the post-processing. Good luck on your edit.

[jadedhills]

Wow thanks for that i would of never thought of doing that, just goes to show, think outside the norm, and really look, I wont forget this lesson, Thank you.