Watching photographer

[tb72]

For your review

cheers

Thierry

[MiniChris]

As I saw it, it needed more definition in the eye and less glare on the forehead - sooooooooooo, I did some selective burning, a little clone work, and added a transparent layer with a thin gray overlay to the forehead, just to knock down that value because, even at 100% on a burn layer, it wouldn't detail out.

I'm wondering if a little closer up might convey the title more.

Compostionally, it is well defined with a good diagonal and a nice gray scale. I've never seen anything abruptly wrong with your composition and for the most part, I think your attention to pose, detail and action are quite superb.



The difference is barely noticeable at this 96dpi level, but it is enough to see the slight editing I did.

[tb72]

Thanks for your comment Chris. Your post p^rocessing highlight the reflect in the eye. Compared to the title you are right I could be a little bit closer