I'm frightened to!
As you know, I'm no portraitist and would normally just sit back and admire the skill that made the picture and enjoy the finished product.
But, as more of a question, is there a shadow under her left eye (right, as we look at it) in #1 that maybe pulls attention away from the rest of the image? Since beginning to avidly read what you (and others) write about lighting and devouring Syl Arena's book on using the 580EXII, I find myself more acutely observing and trying to learn for when I go out there and terrorise the community.
This is really nice work. Not only is she a very beautiful model but in the last photo you have captured a bit of her inner beauty. The lighting as far as I can tell is great. There is a slight bit of shadow on the cheeks and as Donald says under her left eye in the first photo. But don't get me wrong, you have created images that anyone would be proud of and your lethal lady has been portrayed in a way that brings out her natural beauty. One day, I may reach your standard of craft but I know enough to recognise good work when I see it. Congratulations on this fine work.
Sonny
Hi Donald,
I can't really see any problems to be honest - the area is a little contrasty where the bridge of the nose has flagged the light a little, but it was supposed to be fairly "dramatic" / contrasty lighting anyway. We were managing no less than 6 zones of light on this one; 2 rim lights + key + fill + hair + reflector.
I finished retouching these at about 1am - so I'll take another look a bit later on the highres editions to see if I've missed something.
Colin, very nicely done. I like the little extra the weapon provides. #3 and 4 are my favorites, although a slight nit on 3 and I am being picky but two fingers on the trigger almost spoils it. On the positive side I like the slight smile poking through.
I like number four the best. Her eyes are incredible, and the light is awesome. I also like the white background. Simply beautiful. The first three look like she would actually kill you, which I believe is what you might've been going for, so good on you.
Finger OFF the trigger! lol
Thanks Antonio,
Yes the background is real - here's one straight from the camera, with only capture sharpening applied ...
In reality, light only gets onto the background from one of 2 sources ... ambient light (from the room lights), but in reality, 1/125th @ F11 and up means those lights don't introduce anything unless you point the camera directly at the light, and the other potential source is light bleeding and/or bouncing from the strobes; generally that's not a big problem because I have the subject about 5m in front of the backdrop, and I'm careful as to the direction I'm plasing the lights. I even have black curtains I can draw to cover the white studio walls.
Last edited by Colin Southern; 10th March 2011 at 07:25 AM.
Congratulations for this beautiful serie
Great shots, as usual, Colin. This particular one is my favourite. I am sure she must have been overjoyed looking at this shot.
But whats the small thing on her nose? I am not sure if she is wearing any nosepin. There is something very distracting on her right side of the nose, towards the tip.
Hi Colin,
#4 is my favourite, although I also like #3
I can see what Donald means in #1, it would be solved by bringing the camera right light further around to give a little more side and less backlight. That said, I think the shadow lends to the menace.
It is unfortunate in #3, that Holly seems to have a 'grubby face'*; her left cheek has a definite shadowy, edge lit effect. It could be caused by the same 'too far to right and behind' lighting as #1 - that said, if Holly had looked just a little more to left (of you) herself, it would also have avoided the issue.
Beyond that, another thing I noticed in the first three is a double catchlight in each eye, one large, one small, which looks unusual.
Good series as usual though, and of course we all learn through the analysing process, comments and replie.
Thanks for posting them,
* Please don't tell Holly I said this, at least not if she gets hold of that gun again