Last edited by rawill; 26th January 2013 at 06:24 PM.
Hi Rudi, good to see your post. I like the photo. The main subject has great colour.
Maybe I would have commented on the amount of dark green in the background, if the other little purple buds had not been there. As it is though, it works for me. They balance out the dark background enough.
Maybe a bit more crop would work better, but I am not sure of that.
The DOF looks fine, nothing unpleasant there.
Well from my point of view you both summed it up perfectly.
When I look at the first one I love the way the central stamen 'pops',
Then when I look at the secone one and the edge of the petals they are sharp, and I like that.
They were my earliest macro shots, and have had no PP.
Peter, my wife loves you rose, she says she loves the pink and blue.
They are both very nice!!
Narcissus: The flower on the left is maybe a bit too bright, 'competing' with thee 'main' subject.
Rose: Very nice colour. I do like the out off focus bud in the top right corner. I would be tempted to clone out the leaf in the bottom right corner. The rose is my favourite.
Just my two cent......
Regards,Rudi
I agree with Peter,
I like very much the composition and in my opinion the DOP is perfect, since it isolates quite well the flower and, at the same time, it keeps enough detail on the buds in background. Actually I think that those buds are a key element in defining the composition.
Thanks Rudi. I know, I know...that leaf. As the photo was more about long exposure anyway, I decided to leave it in.
I didn't spot it in the half dark, so it is a good reminder for me to check more thorougly next time when I photograph in these circumstances. A flashlight would have helped.