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23rd March 2011, 10:39 PM
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23rd March 2011, 11:17 PM
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Re: Trying to choose one shot. Any C&C please
Mike
For me #3 and #4 drop out immediately. Neither has a specific point of interest. They're too confusing because there is nothing that my eye can setlle on as the main subject in the picture. If that was there, then my eye can wander around the rest of the image more comfortably.
#2 has got light background to the flowers that are fighting with them for attention. Or maybe it's better to say that the power of the flowers (because they are strong in their own right) is diluted by the very bright grass/foliage background.
In #1, there's no question about what we're being invited to look at. We've got flowers at reasonable size within teh frame (although I think they need to fill more of the frame). There's a much better tone across the image - there's nothing really bright hitting me between the eyes. But I think we have too much wood and not enough flower.
The great thing about this set and your attitude towards it, is that it's a learning opportunity. And (please take note) you have already provided the answers yourself (".... experience in composition and technical knowledge..."). So you're already identifying where your learning needs to be focused. The best thing we can do is confirm your own conclusions. Go for it.
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23rd March 2011, 11:45 PM
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Re: Trying to choose one shot. Any C&C please
Thank you Donald for that fast and helpful reply. Of course I can see the faults clearly now__after you've focused my eyes on them !
My only comment, no, justification for the amount of wood in #1 was that it wasn't just a shot of blossom but more a contrast of the new life with the ancient timber, a sort of youth and old age thing. A bit lame but it struck me that way at the time.
Much appreciated advice, I'll try harder next time.
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