Hey there! I did a shoot recently and would love to hear your feedback and thoughts :)
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Thread: C&C on this portrait
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23rd April 2011, 05:26 AM #1New Member
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C&C on this portrait
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23rd April 2011, 05:52 AM #2rob marshall
Re: C&C on this portrait
I like this very much. An unusual portrait, which uses available matching symmetry (dress and the brick-work) to excellent effect. Love the colours too. I'd be very happy to have taken this. Well done. Only slight crticism - I'd take about 10% off the top. That bright area at the top tends to draw the eye away from the girl.
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23rd April 2011, 06:12 AM #3New Member
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Re: C&C on this portrait
Rob, thank you so much for the feedback! A crop to 11x14 for my portfolio should bring the top under control, possibly a -0.5EV gradient in LR too? Here's the 2nd edit...
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23rd April 2011, 06:21 AM #4rob marshall
Re: C&C on this portrait
Yep, that's much better. Cracking!
Originally Posted by Kellen
Rob, thank you so much for the feedback! A crop to 11x14 for my portfolio should bring the top under control, possibly a -0.5EV gradient in LR too? Here's the 2nd edit...
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23rd April 2011, 06:29 AM #5
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Re: C&C on this portrait
I agree with Rob, Perfect. Originally Posted by rob marshall
Yep, that's much better. Cracking!
A superb portrait and worthy of a place in anyone's portfolio.
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23rd April 2011, 06:30 AM #6New Member
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Re: C&C on this portrait
Thank you both!
This is the original processing, it's come a long ways!
Last edited by Kellen; 23rd April 2011 at 06:36 AM.
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