Licking Lolly..... please comment

[Topchi]

this is the photo of the boy grossly involved in his icecream... tried to catch passing movement in local market...
please guide.

Regards
Ravjeet

[rob marshall]

Ravjeet

The poor kid obviously needs a second hand to assist with the ice-cream, but the weight of that watch is proving too much. It must weigh a few pounds at least. Good shot though, with very nice colours. Well caught.

[Topchi]

this is the photo of the boy grossly involved in his icecream... tried to catch passing movement in local market...
please guide.

Regards
Ravjeet

thankyou Rob..

[paulwilbur]

I want to see the sign behind him... good candid, a bit wider - since "we know he is a boy with candy" where is he? Less boy focused and more environment/situation focused.

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paul

[ilovelucydog]

Ravjeet, you have a good eye for a candid shot! You captured a typical little boy... not worried about his ice cream dripping on his clothes, and looking around at what's going on around him as little boys do. And the watch... it makes me think he's wearing his daddy's watch. The vibrant colors are great.

[Topchi]

thanks both of you

[rpcrowe]

I like the shot, the colorful boy superimposed on the almost monochrome sign. However, it seems (at least on my monitor) that the focus might be a wee bit off with the sign more in focus than the boy! And yes, I would also have liked a bit looser framing...